The Additive

I’m working on some new fiction right now, but nothing that’s ready yet to post. And as far as commentary, I kind of blew my energy in an argument on another blog I run (non-sexual in nature), so I don’t think my brain is in the right place for deep thoughts on my fetish.

But, here below I offer a link and excerpt to a smoking fetish story at Alt Sex Stories titled, “The Additive.” It’s a story I have fun returning to once in a while, but usually only a few times a year. I know some of my own stories are “implausible” and require some suspension of disbelief, but the things that happen in this story are so hard to imagine happening given the breadth and depth of them, that it distracts me from the enjoyment of the fetish angle. But that’s more on multiple readings. If I go through it only every once in a while, I can ignore how ludicrous the whole thing is. By the way, I don’t mean to sound like I’m slamming the writer, because it’s an enjoyable enough story. But he/she does leave plot holes that one could drive a truck through.

There were are least three sequels to this story, which were titled Case Study 1, Case Study 2 and Case Study 3, but damned if I can find them online anywhere. Maybe I’ll post them here sometime in the near future

Anyway, here’s the link to the story, which is written by Sollipist: Click here to read ”The Additive.”

Excerpt

His desire held him paralyzed as she pressed herself to him, and buried her face in his neck. She was smelling and feeling his flesh on hers, a new sensation, and she liked it. Her tongue darted out to taste his salty skin, and with her free hand began to burrow beneath his clothing. She pulled back to take another drag, and again blew smoke at his face as she nimbly unbuttoned the shirt. His eyes and hers closed as she began to caress his chest, and press her hips tight against his. She let the cigarette dangle between her lips as she pulled her own shirt over her head. His hands, emerging from paralysis, cupped her breasts, her nipples hard beneath his newly sensual touch She made quick work of his zipper and tugged down his pants in one smooth movement. She wriggled out of her moist, baggy scrubs and circled one leg around Sammat’s midsection, pulling him down to the bed with her. She spread her knees wide and took an anticipatory drag as he positioned himself.

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Original story (The Additive – Click here to view online)

Sequels

Case History Part 1
Case History Part 2
Case History Part 3

~ by smokedawg on July 4, 2009.